Dude, That's talent right there, Although. I think you should go with serious animation. Not as silly. And maybe more original. I mean. I love this. But you could definitely do much more with an original character, and a serious story-line.
Thanks - My usual style is slapstick comedy with cartoony animation - I'd love to do more of my original stories, if I had the time
I think its a bit choppy frame wise, I like it. A bit of audio problems. Over all okay. But could be better.
thank you this was my very first one and I am learning some valuable lessons along the way. I appreciate the feedback.
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